Tear my story to shreds. Please?

I’m not here today. Will be tomorrow, and then for the Oh My Hero! Bloghop.
But for now, I’m over at Unicorn Bell getting one of my stories critiqued. The first 400 words anyhow.

Have a guess which one it is.
*hintpointy<=hinthint*

So go, hop over and tear my story to shreds. You know you want to.
No sugar-coating, ya hear? ^_^

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