My next stop in tackling the loose ends before Nanowrimo monopolises my November is detangling the issue I’ve got with The Vengeful God.
I’ve decided to rewrite a scene that was solely from Kael’s PoV, breaking it into one from Laccindy’s and Veng’s. Currently, I’m halfway through this process, having completed the first PoV. I lose a few things, change some others and gain more of everything as I always seem to when I rewrite. In all honesty, I think it flows better this way.
I may also add another scene a few chapters later, which will likely be my next stop, along with a few more major rewrites. Hoy. Whilst inserting the novella and its two PoVs (Laccindy’s especially) has given me a little more freedom in how things are laid out, it’s looking like any progress on Dark One’s Bride won’t be until December.