Rainbow Snippets is a Facebook Group where people post six sentence pieces of their LGBTQ+ novels.
This snippet is from my fantasy wip To Target the Heart. In this piece Hamish and Darshan have just managed to not be caught snogging in the castle library instead of language studies by Hamish’s older, stuck-up sister…
Hamish hastily adjusted his clothes. Could the man not do something as simple as kissing without pawing at him like a bear seeking to break open a chicken coop? “We were just—”
“I’m tutoring him,” Darshan blurted. Unlike himself, the spellster looked as immaculate as ever. “Teaching him my native tongue, as it were.”
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Aldrea Alien 
Heh! I love Hamish’s observations! 🙂
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He’s a very observant kind of guy.
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Oops to getting caught. This was fun.
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-Almost- getting caught. Actually getting caught would have quite the different reaction.
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Native tongue… ROFL…. Well, I guess it wasn’t exactly a lie…
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🙂 Darshan’s very dedicated to his tutoring…
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Great dialogue and love the line about the bear in the chicken coop.
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Thanks.
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“Native tongue” cracked me up! Great snippet.
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🙂 Is it bad that I cracked myself up when I wrote it?
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VERY amusing! Loved the snippet…
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Thanks. 🙂
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“Native tongue.” Hahahaha! I love it.
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🙂
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Love Darshan’s last comment. lol
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😀
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Native tongue. Yeah, right. 😉
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That’s his story and he’s sticking with it.
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Hahaha … native tongue …. love it!
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😉
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hahaha, that’s so funny, I haven’t heard the language course joke in a while. 😉
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It was begging for it. 🙂
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Hahaha. Native tongue. That’s too funny! 😀
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😀 Glad you think so.
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Hehehe, I love the wit!
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He’s a very tongue-in-cheek kind of guy.
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bahaha native tongue huh? I bet he was.
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Hehe.
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“Native tongue…” ROFL! Okay, I’m dying. Well, it wasn’t a lie! I love the double meaning to it and quick cover. I like this guy already. Hopefully Hamish’s expression doesn’t give anything away over the lie and cover.
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Hopefully so or they’ll be ever so slightly screwed.
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