Rainbow Snippets is a Facebook Group where people post six sentence pieces of their LGBTQ+ novels.
This snippet is from Spectre of the Golden Voice. This piece is a little after Krissi, a young half-elven singer, has just sung before the emperor’s son and retired to her chambers to await Ghost’s criticism…
There was a subtle change in the air that spoke of an entrance being opened and an absence of creaking that meant it wasn’t the door. “Ghost,” she said, acknowledging his presence without lifting her eyes from the ruby ring.
“And how did my muse’s regal performance go?”
“Were you not there to hear? Most unlike you to miss the main event.”
On the edge of her vision, she spied the man waving his gloved hand in the air. “My usual box was occupied by ruffians.”
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I love the description of Ghost’s entrance π
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Thank you. π
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Intriguing. That opening paragraph was lovely!
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Thanks. I first thought it might be too much, but Ghost tends to exude a certain amount of drama.
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I can so picture the ghost “waving his gloved hand in the air” and saying, βMy usual box was occupied by ruffians.β π π π
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And the nerve of it all! Occupying -his- box! Don’t they know?
Seriously, I’m glad that comes through clearly.
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Oh I love the way he speaks. Great snippet, Aldrea. π
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Thank you! π
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Lovely description!
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Thanks!
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Great description — very easy to envision.
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I also like the description–“to await Ghost’s criticism” kind of makes me think of “American Idol” and Simon Cowell.
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Goodness, I don’t think I could ever make him as sharp as Simon.
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Interesting in all respects! Loved the line about the entrance.
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Thank you! π
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Interesting entrance and sounds like a very interesting story.
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Thank you. It kind of tacked itself onto the series and wouldn’t stop pestering me, so I’m still working on the details, but I certainly hope so.
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A ghost is stymied by ruffians sitting in his favorite booth? Clearly this isn’t a stereotypical ghost, which makes me want to learn more.
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Indeed. Whilst Ghost lives by his own moral code and most “ruffians” who invade his space would be dealt with rather brutally, he knows better than to risk the theatre (and his muse’s livelihood). Doesn’t mean he won’t be petty about it.
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I like Ghost’s style.
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Thanks. π
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Well, that’s one excuse. I wonder what he’s really been up to.
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Squeezing through maintenance crawl spaces.
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Love the description! He reminds me of Phantom of the Opera all of a sudden.
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Likely because Phantom of the Opera is a big influence in this one and Ghost shows it most prominently. π
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π That makes me happy, because I love the Phantom of the Opera.
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