This week, my Weekend Writing Warriors and Snippet Sunday Folk, it’s another snippet from Spectre of the Golden Voice.
The plot’s still being worked on (and, yes, is influenced by PotO) but this is a rough blurb…
When Krissi’s singing whilst working in the bowels of the theatre draws the attention of the theatre’s infamous Ghost, she finds herself under his private tutelage and thrust into the spotlight as tragedy threatens to shut down the theatre. As would-be suitors flock to her side to share her newfound fame, Krissi finds herself torn between protecting her family and following her heart.
This snippet is from a little sooner in the storyline. Where Krissi has just performed for the first time to keep the desperate theatre from having to refund the audience…
Krissi marched up to Mistress Aashi and thrust out her hand as the woman turned. “My payment,” she demanded, “will be one gold coin and you will give it to me now.”
Mistress Aashi eyed her outstretched hand, sneering as if Krissi was diseased. “That was not the agreed amount.”
“Either you give me gold or I march out there and tell them you let an elf sing the lead.” There would be an uproar the very second she revealed her ears. People would demand their money if not the theatre’s closure.
“If you think you can attempt to blackmail me, child, you are sadly—”
“Mistress!” Megala called as she ran from behind the heavy curtains. She collapsed at her owner’s feet, babbling, “The audience, Mistress, they’re demanding an encore.”
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Interesting! 😀
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Well, that’s certainly interesting.
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Nice tease of an interesting world.
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Thank you, I have so much fun with this one.
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Ahh, it looks like Krissi might end up with her gold coin after all!
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For sure and a whole heap of trouble along with it.
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Ooo very intriguing.
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Intriguing indeed.
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I think the payment may just have gone up.
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Just a little bit. 🙂
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I definitely think she will be asking for more than a gold coin. Very interesting!
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Certainly. And thanks.
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I’m guessing she gets paid that . . . and more. Nice surprise, Aldrea!
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Tick off the magic-slinging nobles or pay the demanding singer her named price… hmm.
Thanks! 🙂
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Saved by an encore!
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This is the first I’ve read, so I don’t know if it’s been mentioned before, but I loved reading the reveal that she’s an elf. Well done.
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Technically, she’s half elf… not that presenting it that way would make a difference to the audience. You have pointy ears? Elf.
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I certainly wasn’t expecting to find that she was an elf.
Could you do me a favor and write faster? Thanks.
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Oh yes. Things would be far easier for her if she was human.
Lol. I’m trying.
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Great timing for the encore demand! Fascinating story and this snippet certainly added to the understanding of the character.
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If there’s one thing Megala can do well, it’s timing. Thank you. 🙂
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Good for her demanding payment. Can’t wait for the encore.
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Her usual pay totally doesn’t cover standing on stage belting out songs in front of a large, and dangerous, audience.
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Yay for timing! Great snippet! 😀
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I’m sure Mistress Aashi would think otherwise. 🙂
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Ooo, what a great twist to the character of Krissi!
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Thanks! 🙂
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Interesting twist. Thanks for sharing.
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Thak you. 🙂
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Fascinating glimpse into the theatre world. I agree with P.T. Write faster. LOL
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Thanks. 🙂
Trying, flu’s slowing me down.
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An elf singing! What next? Great scene.
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Singing opera, what’s more.
Thanks for reading.
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I’m intrigued.
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