We’re continuing on from last week’s snippet from my wip, To Target the Heart, where Hamish wasn’t at all convinced Darshan could be discreet after snogging him in the middle of a pub.
The prior sentence was:
“All right, that was not one of my finest moments, but I was drunk and… curious.”
The confusion-etched wrinkles around those brilliant, aquamarine eyes deepened as amusement took over. “And horny?”
Laughter bubbled through Darshan’s throat. “That, too.” Not that he’d much hope of completely quashing the feeling once it dug its claws in, one of the barbs of being born into a strong magical bloodline.
However, letting those emotions command his actions was inexcusable. The tales they would’ve told at court. Not that he’d lived his life back home in any way free of scandal. “Do let me know if I get a bit much, I cannot always tell.”
Hamish remained silent, but his brow twitched briefly in puzzlement.
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Having staved off the idea of marrying a woman for years, Prince Hamish finds himself forced to face its realities when he becomes the prize in a contest of arms. But one contestant promises a way out. Can they win against all the odds?
Intriguing…
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Thanks.
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Hamish is puzzled, but at least he isn’t upset. ❤️
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It takes a lot to upset Hamish.
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I like him already!
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I like these two 🙂
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😀
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They’re going to be a fun couple, I think.
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I certainly hope they’ll turn out that way.
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I assume Hamish wonders what he would consider ‘being a bit much’ considering what he’s already done.
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Amongst other things, yes.
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lol “I cannot always tell” is he even trying?
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Maybe a smidgen.
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WOW. Lots going on and it’s ready to blow out.
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They do seem to understand each other pretty well here…enjoyed the snippet.
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They have their moments of clarity.
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Interesting relationship developing here. Can’t wait to read more.
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Thank you. 🙂
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“I cannot always tell.” Now there’s some (sneaky) plausible deniability. 🙂
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lol
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Great snippet! I enjoyed it a lot. 😀
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Thanks! 🙂
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Haha, I think he knows when he’s being a bit much, but just doesn’t care, the cheeky bugger.
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lol.
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They do understand each other or so it seems. Intrigued to know more.
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I wonder what he’s confused by. Darshan’s being too much or why Darshan thought he couldn’t handle it. Great snippet, Aldrea.
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Ah the flirting. Gotta love it. ❤
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