Continuing with the wip, To Poison a Prince, for snippets.
For those of you catching up… Darshan and Hamish are a pair of thirty-something princes from two vastly different lands who are now travelling through the ginormous Udynea Empire that Darshan is from on their way to the capital.
This one is carrying on from last week, where Darshan mentioned his half-sister.
To top it off, his homicidal sibling had invited them to her estate this evening under the guise of a soirée. She’d even seen that it was held in honour of his approaching birthday so he couldn’t ignore the blasted invite. At least, it would be bad form to refuse. He could just see it now, all the vicious rumours she would spread about Hamish’s influence on their vris Mhanek in Darshan’s absence.
Huffing, he once more unrolled the scroll bearing the now-broken seal of a vlossina. Being the only one of the Mhanek’s daughters who resided in this dismal city, she hardly needed to use it or the signature on the bottom of the letter. To have both marking the parchment hinted at uncertainty in her status. As she should be.
The invite was curt and as two-faced as its inscriber. And for her to explicitly talk about him bringing Hamish? Dying to meet him.
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Hamish is finally free to live with the man who won his heart.
If only someone didn’t keep trying to ruin his happily-ever-after.
Love the intrigue packed in this snippet!
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Thank you. 🙂
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“As she should be.” Nice hook. Loads of questions now… 🙂
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😀 Thanks.
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Eep. She sounds dangerous, but at least they’ve got her number. 😳❤️
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She is dangerous. Mostly to those threatening her position.
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Which I suppose is kinda defensible.
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Not the nicest woman around. Heaven help us when you meet someone like that!
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No, she’s not.
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Sounds like he’s right to worry! At least he’s smart enough to recognize the potential danger from his relative.
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He’s had years of practice in dealing with her, after all.
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Many undercurrents here on various levels. I hope he goes to this event ready for anything…I’m guessing there’ll be treachery. Great snippet!
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It wouldn’t be a proper Udynean party without a little treachery.
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I wonder if her final line shouldn’t have been written not as “Dying to meet him” but “Killing to meet him”?
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Oh, she’d definitely kill to meet Hamish. Or just straight-up kill Hamish. She’s flexible like that.
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I don’t think this party is going to be fun at all (except for us, the readers!)
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I’m sure it’ll have its moments.
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Lovely, ominous final line…. this sounds right up my street!
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Thank you. 🙂
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Wow. She sounds dangerous. And conniving. Great snippet.
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Here’s hoping she’ll read the same once she shows up.
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That sister sounds like bad news. She’d better not touch Darshan or Hamish!
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I ain’t promising nothing.
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Hm, I hate her already!
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Good. She’s not supposed to be likeable.
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Now I’m intrigued by his sister.
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😀
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