I’m done currently neck-deep in the final edits for To Target the Heart in preparation for its April release. After which, I’ll likely be changing my snippets from the sequel, To Poison a Prince.
For those of you catching up… Darshan and Hamish are a pair of thirty-something princes from two vastly different lands who are now travelling through the ginormous Udynea Empire that Darshan is from on their way to the capital.
This one is carrying on from last week with Hamish expressing his opinion on his new attire and ended with the words: “I sparkle. A man should nae twinkle like a bauble.”
Darshan looked down at his own formal attire; the metallic thread and small gemstones glittered upon the golden silk. “Shouldn’t I?”
Hamish gave an exasperated huff. “I didnae mean you. You’re the vris Mhanek, you’re meant to stand out; you’re used to it. I’ve spent me whole life trying to blend in.”
In more ways than one. And the attempt to hide his true self had almost cost him his life. “I’m afraid there’s little chance of you not drawing attention regardless of what you wore.” Even without arriving on Darshan’s arm, Hamish’s height would have him standing literally head and shoulders above much of the court.
Don’t forget to check out the other excerpts at Weekend Writing Warriors, Snippet Sunday or Rainbow Snippets.
With the New Year, it’s also another month closer to the release of To Target the Heart, the story of where Darshan and Hamish first met and all they went through to get where they are now. Currently on pre-order.
Having staved off the idea of marrying a woman for years, Prince Hamish finds himself forced to face its realities when he becomes the prize in a contest of arms. How can he win with the odds stacked against him?
I agree with Darshan–twinkle away! ❤
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Indeed.
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Nice save, Hamish!
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*snicker* At least he’s being consistent in needing to pull his foot out of his mouth.
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Aw, such a sweet exchange! (heart) Personally I’m looking forward to the mutual sparkle. (more heart)
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Thank you. 🙂
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They call that the backstroke. 🙂 And Hamish did it well.
Seriously, he came across as sincere–and it shows how much he appreciates Darshan’s appearance. . Nice bit of writing!
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Extracting foot from mouth: Hamish’s current occupation.
Thanks.
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Nicely done. Love the log line, too!
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Thank you. 😀
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Oh, I’m really looking forward to that moment when they walk in together.
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So much shiny.
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As a person who shrivels at the thought of twinkling, I think I agree with Darshan — but I can see Hamish’s point, as well.
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Nice bit of conversation between the two men, enjoyed the excerpt!
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Thank you.
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Ah Hamish, he’s so sweet bless him!
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😀
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Sparkle away, I tend to agree with Darshan 🙂
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He’s always been an extravagant one.
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Love the description of the sparkling things
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Thanks.
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