Still neck-deep in the final edits for To Target the Heart but I believe I’ll be done by next weekend. After which, I shall be changing my snippets to those from Someone Else’s Shoes.
So this’ll likely be the last of Darshan and Hamish for a wee while.
This snippet skips ahead a bit from last week with them entering the soirée Darshan’s sister is hosting.
The door swung inwards as they neared, bisecting the image of the tree and allowing golden light to spill into the foyer. Darshan strode through the doorway with barely a pause, leaving Hamish to follow.
The whole room shone with a golden light. Hamish halted beside his husband at the top of the stairs—an elven man also shared the landing, there to announce attendees as they entered—blinking to see anything beyond the glow. He caught flashes of colour when he squinted, but little else.
The elven man bowed, his tanned face gaining a sickly shade. “His imperial highness,” he announced, his booming voice neatly cutting the chatter below, “Darshan vris Mhanek, and…” With his face gaining colour at double the speed he had lost it, the man’s eyes darted from Darshan to Hamish. The elf wet his lips, clearly torn between assuming and enquiring. “His husband…?” The tight note of a question lingered in that last word.
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Having staved off the idea of marrying a woman for years, Prince Hamish finds himself forced to face its realities when he becomes the prize in a contest of arms. How can he win with the odds stacked against him?
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Very interesting as your snippet moves along.
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Thank you. 🙂
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I like the description of the room. It is very evocative. I feel for the elvish fellow, not knowing exactly how to announce the pair.
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It’s not every day the heir to the empire appears with his husband in tow.
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You’d think someone would have told the poor guy in advance…
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Yes, but everyone “knows” Darshan vris Mhanek isn’t interested in marrying anyone.
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Lovely entrance they’re making. I get the feeling the attendant is trying not to spoil it, even if he is…confused. 😌
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He certainly doesn’t want to make trouble.
Having the ground swallow him? That he’d much rather prefer right now.
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Sounds like elves aren’t terribly enlightened.
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More easily panicked.
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Well that’s certainly an awkward way to announce them! I wonder if it’s a harbinger of the night ahead…the description of the room, the light and the colors was also terrific. Enjoyed the snippet…
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It’s certainly not going to be an easy night.
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That was uncomfortable! Why hadn’t his position been given to the elf at such an important event? Or is this their official ‘coming out’?
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More Hamish’s debut in court rather than a ‘coming out’ for them.
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So this is a surprise, then–that he’s now married? This begs questions… Nice writing!
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For those not privy to spy networks, yeah.
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I’m surprised he didn’t already know that…
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It’s relatively new info.
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Aw I’m gonna miss these two sooo much! Congrats on nearly finishing to target the heart, I can’t wait to read both stories completed!
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Thank you.
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I’m really enjoying this
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Thank you.
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